What would Don Draper do if he were a SaaS product manager? He wouldn’t just pitch the product features. He’d sell the story. Because in SaaS, great product copy isn’t fluff, it’s your conversion engine. The right words and phrases can turn free trial tire-kickers into buyers, even loyal power users, and help your UI actually land the punch it’s throwing.
Yet too many teams treat copywriting like an afterthought—something to "fill in later" after the design is done. Big mistake.
Even the most beautifully built product needs copy that pulls its weight. Great product copywriting bridges the gap between what your product does and why users should care. It guides, convinces, reassures, and yes, sometimes even charms.
This guide breaks down how to write SaaS product copy that leads to conversion. Whether you're speaking to first-time visitors or longtime customers, these ten best practices will help you sharpen your message and move the metrics that matter.
1. Know Who You’re Writing For
A good copywriter asks before a single word is on the page: who are you trying to appeal to?
Copywriting begins with understanding your readers. This means you need to get heir goals, pain points, and their contexts right.
- Identify what problems your product solves for the buyer.
- Understand motivations: Are they trying to save time, reduce costs, or impress their team?
- Match tone to your brand voice and user preference.
Use insights from interviews, support tickets, and sales calls to inform the phrases you use. Great copy doesn't just describe, but convinces your readers. Think about the words like your users use. If they call it a "dashboard" or a "collaboration tool," so should you.
2. Focus on Benefits, Not Just Features
One of the most common mistakes in SaaS product descriptions is leading with features. While it’s important to mention product features and product specifications, readers care more about what it does for them.
Compare:
- Feature: "Advanced permission settings."
- Benefit: "Control who sees what with advanced permissions—no more back-and-forth with IT."
Good product copywriting always asks: How does this solve a user problem? A detailed product description should balance clarity and outcomes. The more specific you are about the benefits, the more appeal your product will have over competitors.
3. Write Headlines That Promise Value
Your headlines should be persuasive and scannable. Whether it's the first line of a landing page or a section header, it should grab attention and hint at a benefit. Because your average product shoppers are inundated with options.
Try formats like:
- "[Do X] Without [Pain Y]"
- "The Simplest Way to [Achieve Goal]"
- "Why SaaS Teams Are Switching to [Your Tool]"
Great headlines are a form of microcopy that guide users and set the tone. A/B test them regularly to improve conversion. And bring in your copywriter early. Headline writing is not a last-minute job.
4. Make Your CTAs Specific and Actionable
A great call-to-action (CTA) isn’t just about design, but about how convincing the copy is. It must persuade users to move forward and make the purchas or convert on upsells.
Stronger CTAs use persuasive verbs, speak to the user’s intent, and highlight what they’ll get. Examples:
- "Try it free for 14 days"
- "Start building flows now."
- "See the different for yourself."
- "Add to cart and get started instantly"
Now, "cart" may sound a little ecommerce-y, it can be just as relevant in SaaS when offering tiered plans, add-ons, or modular features (aka SaaS kitting). Think of them like shoppers putting your products in their digital basket.
And most importantly, be sure each CTA ties back to a product feature or benefit the buyer actually cares about.
5. Reduce Friction With Microcopy
Microcopy is the small but mighty part of product copywriting. It includes tooltips, labels, confirmations, and instructions that keep users moving.
- "No credit card required" eliminates purchase anxiety.
- "You can always change this later" keeps users from stalling.
- "Why we ask for this info" helps build trust.
Use bullet points or a bulleted list to make your UI more scannable so your userse can read quickly. Microcopy can appeal directly to hesitant users and ease them into purchase decisions.
6. Use Social Proof to Build Trust
In SaaS, your product description should not exist in a vacuum. Support it with real testimonials and customer reviews. This is especially helpful when you're trying to persuade readers unfamiliar with your brand.
Try this structure:
- Stat: "Trusted by 12,000+ SaaS companies."
- Testimonial: "[Your Product] helped us cut churn by 30%."
- Validation: Ratings, logos, or case studies.
This approach builds credibility and helps buyers compare your functionality with competitors. Don’t be afraid to use detailed product endorsements that speak to specific pain points.
7. Speak the User's Language
Persuasive product copy sounds like something your users would actually say. Avoid buzzwords. Use the terms they use to describe their problems.
Scan support tickets or onboarding calls for actual phrases your users repeat. Then plug those phrases back into your product description, bullet points, and CTAs.
For example:
- Instead of "robust task management system,"
- Try: "Easily track every task from idea to done."
Good copy doesn’t show off. It shows up. Words like "fast," "simple," or "stress-free" can be more effective than fancy terminology.
8. Write for Every Stage of the Funnel
Effective product copywriting isn't just for landing pages. You need persuasive, clear copy across every user touchpoint:
- Awareness: Highlight brand voice and differentiation
- Consideration: Include product specifications and benefits
- Decision: Use testimonials, detailed product descriptions, and competitive comparisons
- Post-purchase: Reinforce value with in-app copy, onboarding guidance, and upgrade CTAs
Smart copywriting ensures you don’t just win the purchase—you win the long-term relationship. Every paragraph and product description should help move the buyer, as well as your existing customers closer to success.
9. A/B Test Everything
Don't know what works in your product copy and what doesn't? Is it a bit confusing to see if your brand voice is clicking with your users? A/B test it.
Like this:
- Different paragraphs and bullet points
- Short vs. long form product descriptions
- Headline phrasing
- CTA positioning and wording
Use data to decide what persuades buyers and drives conversion. Let the results shape your copywriting strategy. A strong copywriter will treat testing as part of the writing process, not just post-launch optimization.
10. Make Copy Part of Your Product Process
Product copy isn’t just the final polish. It should evolve with your product. Make it part of your product design process, not just your marketing team’s backlog.
- Involve your copywriter in feature launches
- Treat microcopy like UX, not just text
- Use internal reviews to make sure your brand voice stays consistent
Writing techniques matter. Formatting matters. But nothing matters more than making your product copy serve the user. Copy that reflects your unique product features—and why they matter—will always stand out.
Great Product Copywriting Results in Conversion
Product copywriting isn’t just about sounding smart. It’s about helping users take action. It’s about connecting your product description to a real-life benefit. It’s about writing persuasive, scannable, conversion-driven copy that makes the path to value feel obvious.
Whether you’re writing a paragraph for your dashboard, a bulleted list on a pricing page, or a product description in an onboarding email, your copy should always describe, convince, and convert.
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